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Tumney Mujhe Diya

Bazz uthe jab ek sath,

ikrar ke wo mere tar,

Kuch log kahte hain,

ye tarana tumney mujhe diya,

anayas jab gayin nazar,

uss dhundhli tasveer per,

dill mein ek tees uthi,

ye fasana tumney mujhe diya

mere ladkhadate kadam,

achanak gayein aise shambhal,

jaise wapas lautne ka

bahana tumney mujhe diya

Chayi jab anhoni kashish,

tuta jab bhi koi mujhsa manish,

to kya dard e dil chupane ka

thikana tumney mujhe diya

 
Falak PatelFans: 0
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Remarks By : Falak Patel On : Saturday, 05-Jan-2008 08:28
Superb... you are really jack of all tardes with masters capability. I still remember those punches of our boxing class. ur music sessions and ofcourse the way you teach us C and .NET. u r a great poet, a hard core developer and a good human..... hats off......
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Remarks By : akshita On : Sunday, 06-Jan-2008 07:40
ultimate, lovely ....i guess this is one of ur most favourite.....
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Remarks By : Fiza Jaawani On : Saturday, 12-Jan-2008 15:58
wow very nice !
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Remarks By : mehhekk On : Sunday, 20-Jan-2008 23:21
great
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Remarks By : Rakesh Ranjan On : Tuesday, 22-Jan-2008 07:26
Ake Tumney(??) hi Kaafee Hah.....ya...anhoni kashish..(?)..ladkhadate kadam..(?)..dhundhli tasveer ..(?).. Sabhi ke leya ,Alag ....Alga....TUMNEY...hai.....
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Remarks By : Kushagra Verma On : Monday, 04-Feb-2008 05:52
seems like a real story but very well expressed through rythmic words. acha hain.
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Remarks By : Nishtha Kashyap On : Thursday, 07-Feb-2008 08:12
agreed with kushagra. very good peom. 2nd last para is great.
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Remarks By : Amit Jha On : Tuesday, 15-Jun-2010 02:32
bahut achi rachna hain.. mere dill ko chu gayin...
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